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Melanie Bremner is presently running and maintaining an online Family EBook Sales shop, and produces a weekly newsletter full of stories, facts and fun for the whole family. Sign up for her newsletter and receive a monthly bonus. http://ebooks4families.biz

Monday, November 28, 2005

YEAH! My site is finally up and my books are being sold! I have several other books on various topics to be sold as well. I would really love it if you could drop by and check it out. Leave a comment or two. Tell your friends. Marketing these days is so expensive and I am so desperate to get the word of mouth happening. I am adding new books every day as I get them put together, so visit often to make sure you don't miss out on anything. http://onestopebookshop.ca
The following article I would like to leave with you. It is geared for writing articles for the web but it still has valuable tips for writing in general that can be used by all.

How to Write an Article for the Web
Copyright 2005 Mark Meshulam

Most web-marketing experts tout the power of articles for
their ability to create inbound links and enhanced
credibility for websites. But what they don't tell you
is... how the heck do you write an article?

You need two important elements for a great article:
something to say and the means to say it. First let's
discuss "something to say", otherwise known as content.

It is impossible to write something of interest to others
without good, meaty content. Content comes from your
interests and experiences. To generate content you need to
look at yourself and your life in a new way. Look for
situations in your day which "hit home" in some way. If you
are intrigued, frustrated, thrilled, challenged or
otherwise awakened, then pursue the topic in greater depth.

As you work and play, have an extra mental circuit running
which observes your life. Let's pretend this circuit is a
separate person, the Observer. Now when you go along your
way, occasionally become the Observer and try to cultivate
a new point of view. The Observer is not mired in your
day-to-day struggles. Instead, the Observer watches you
struggling, with clear unemotional vision yet with humor
and an interest in patterns and themes.

Becoming the Observer will help you discover the
interesting parts of your life which you can then bring to
your reader. You can develop your golden nuggets of
experience further by expressing them aloud to others (or
even just to yourself). Through verbalization, you will
find additional points of view and experiences of others to
enrich your topic.

Then, research your topic by word-searching on your
favorite search engine.

Eventually a theme or pattern will emerge. Go a step
further and try to create a solution, position or attitude
with regard to the theme. This will become your unique
"take" on the subject.

Example: A while ago a consultant hired by one of my
customers was irritating me by getting visibly excited
whenever a small problem or issue appeared on our mutual
project. I developed this into a more universal theme and
wrote "Beware the Chicken Little Consultant".

The theme is consultants who use fear tactics. The position
taken in the article is that such consultants should be
dismissed and their users should educate themselves from
less emotional sources. The attitude of the article is
lightly humorous and mocking. Calling the consultant
"Chicken Little" in the title is an example of this.

So far we have covered how to find and develop content,
including arriving at a position and an attitude about the
central theme. When you have come this far, start writing
immediately.

First, jot down a few sample titles which will help guide
you in your writing. Write some key points you want to be
sure to cover. Then, get started writing the article.

When you write, imagine that you are sitting by a campfire
with a smart and interested friend. You are comfortable and
lighthearted. Your unique personality is shining through.
You have a lot to share and this excites you. Tell that
friend your story. What is the first thing she needs to
know? Lay the groundwork step by step. Toss in a wry
comment or two but don't lose the central path.

Tell your story in an order which would be most
understandable to your listener. The order might be
chronological or logical, building from one point to the
next. Keep going until you bring it to a satisfying
endpoint.

During this part of the writing, which I affectionately
call "puking", try to refrain from second-guessing your
words. You spent much time filling yourself with ideas. Now
is the time to puke them all out. There should be a feeling
of "flow". The words should want to come out. Let them. You
will feel empty and good when you are finished.

After I "puke", I do a few quick re-reads and fix obvious
problems such as reorganizing the order of certain
paragraphs, or making the "person" consistent. This article
is written in first(I) and second(you) person. In it, I am
talking to you. It could have also been written in third
(they) person. Example: "Experienced writers organize their
ideas chronologically or logically".

You can mix the "person" for a lively article. Just be sure
it's not awkward.

Look also for time consistency. Is your story written in
the present? This article is written in the present. Things
are happening right now. In one portion I refer to an
article I wrote in the past, however the analysis of the
article was written in the present, because the article
still exists.

You can mix past, present and future in your article.
Drawing from the past and projecting into the future are
powerful presentation methods. In your re-read, make sure
that this is being done correctly. Inform your readers
without confusing them.

Check to make sure you are consistent with regard to
singular and plural. Example of doing it wrong: "We want to
inform our readers without confusing her".

Make sure each idea has its own paragraph. When writing for
the web, remember that your article may be displayed in
narrow newspaper-like columns. Paragraphs should be short.
Avoid paragraphs with more than six sentences. Keep
sentences short. If you must have a long sentence, follow
it with a short one to perk up the reader and keep her
motivated to continue reading.

Here is a big one: cut out all extraneous words. Don't
repeat. Pretend each word is worth $5 and you are paying
the tab. When you finish slashing words, go back and do it
again. You will be surprised that you had so much filler.

When giving a list of points, do your reader a favor and
write the points in a list with numbering or bullets. Don't
make the reader cherry-pick your ideas out of a blob of
text.

Avoid reusing words. Keep them varied and fresh.

Check your spelling!

Now that you have done your re-reads, save your work. Leave
it alone for a day or two. You need this time to forget
what you wrote. Next time when you edit, you will read with
fresh eyes. Weaknesses in your article will jump out. Time
to clean again.

Now read the article out loud. Speak every word clearly and
not too fast. A good article should not only look good on
the page, but it should also sound great when performed.

When I arrive at this point, I will typically publish the
article on my blog. This is a low risk activity because I
can always edit it again later. After 5-7 days, if I can't
find anything else to fix, I will submit the article for
syndication. This is the point of no return. Once the
article is out there will be no more fixing.

Writers write because they feel a need. When they write,
they feel fulfilled. It's possible that you could be a
writer. With effort you can experience the gratification of
seeing your words in print and your ideas spread across the
internet.


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Wednesday, November 23, 2005

I was going through some of my writing the other day and I came across a story I had written about an African friend who had visited us one winter when I was ten. We had him out making snow angels, building a fort, having a massive snowball fight, and soaked from head to toe at the end of the three hours we kept him outside. He loved it. He had never seen snow before let alone played in it so he was just like one of us ten year olds.
I realized though while reading my story that because I had used such descriptive words and metaphors, I felt like I was right back to that experience. I remembered it vividly through my words as if it were only yesterday and not over twenty years ago. That is what we should strive for each and every time we start out with a storyline. The reader truly wants to feel what you did. He wants to be able to look around and see the scenery as it would be if it were a real experience.
Anyone who wants to write a book and put it in ebook form and try to sell it without worrying about setting it up on a site can contact me and I will put it on my site. All rights reserved for you of course. We will even sign a legal contract for your safety. Just a thought to help you out. No age limit either. One of the pages I have on my site is for families, so would love to have all stories from family members. I know my teenage daughter wants to make money anyway she can. When you have to go to school and study, and maybe help around the house there may be no time to go find work outside the house, so why not try to make money from home. Anyone under the age of 16 though needs to get parental permission and have parents speak to me first so we are all on the same page about anything legal.

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Tuesday, November 15, 2005

I live pay check to pay check. Most people these days do. Yet so many of us have dreams that may often require alot of money for training. Therefore they never get realized due to the lack of funding to press forward.
I have found a site that offers free writing courses. There are a variety of course writing materials you can learn from. Whether it is a business idea you would like to learn to write for, or short stories, or lengthy thrillers. Any tips we can get to learn how to hone our skills to become the best in our field at no cost is the best option for us.
Some of us may not have been in a school for a long time. Even if we had, things have changed in the learning field so much that I am sure what I learned in grade 12 english back in 1989 is nowhere near what they are teaching now. I have looked at my daughters grade 11 curriculum and have no clue as to what they are teaching now. Most of it is like a foreign language to me.
I am always on the hunt for free easy to understand courses where I can feel like I am gaining ground and not consistently sliding down the mountain of knowledge. Check out the site http://www.writershelper.com/writing-courses.html for your guide to free writing courses suitable to your learning abilities, and which will fit into your busy schedule.

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Monday, November 14, 2005

I have been doing alot of work on my children's stories and website production that I haven't really spent much time thinking of writing tips or more helpful information for you all. I am sure you can all relate in one way or another with a busy life. Sometimes it can be hard though to try to live your dream at the same time as living your daily existence and make sure the bills get paid.
It means that for as long as it may take your dream may have no monetary value until you can make it manifest into something financial around your other priorities. Sometimes that takes years. For me, I have been writing for 25 years and I am finally getting close to seeing some fruition. But that is what makes it a dream. A goal, a drive, a desire that burns and keeps you going with the solid assurance that no matter how long it takes you will press on. It gives your life meaning in the rigmarole of your daily existence.
In this time of uncertainty in all things around us we need a concrete base to plant our feet in. Our dreams are the only things that no one can take from us unless we let them. If you believe in something passionately enough, you can make it a part of you. It doesn't necessarily have to have a dollar value either. A dream is something that helps you to stay true to yourself and gives you the desire and motivation to make it through an ever changing world.
The following poem I had published in Eternal Portraits in 2005 by The International Library of Poetry poetry.com

Jesus

I was lost and all alone
I was feeling rather blue
My life was filled with pain so deep
I didn't know what to do.

One day I finally found
A deep secret to my life
There was a name that I could call
To sooth and end all strife.

Jesus is the name I cry
He makes my life complete
He is my life, my joy, my love
All my needs He can meet.

Jesus hears me night and day
No sin He can't forgive
He takes away all pain and sorrow
A life through Him I live.

by Melanie Bremner Doran © copyright 2005

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Sunday, November 13, 2005

Do you live on a farm? Or have you lived on a farm? I never lived on a farm, but I had some friends growing up who did and I used to visit them for a few weeks every summer. I loved it! Getting up a 5:30am every morning to do chores kind of took some getting used to. But once you got to enjoy the fruits of your labour like homemeade pies with the berries you picked and the butter you helped to churn, it all seemed worth it.
The massive land acreage to run and play on, the variety of animals to feed and pet. It was all an experience a city girl like me needed to put some perspective on my own life.
I came across a site that has a contest for writing about farm life and I thought it would be a great opportunity to get some of the experiences I have had down on paper. It also gave me a reason to call my old friend to see if she would like to participate. It has been over ten years since we talked. We had a good time reminiscing about the good ole days.
Even if you have never lived on a farm but would love to share in some enjoyable stories, you could go check out what the site has to offer at http://www.farmanddairy.com/1editorialbody.lasso?-token.folder=2005-11-10&-token.story=54410.112114&-token.subpub=

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Saturday, November 12, 2005

Do you have teenage children? I do. They are online talking with their friends every night after they get their homework done until the wee hours. I talk on MSN alot as well but as all my friends would know, I fully write out my sentences as if I was writing a paper or something to be read by everyone. My daughter knows short forms for sayings that even I have to ask her the meaning. Like LOL(laugh out loud), or ROFL(roll on floor laughing). Here you try one. What is this? LMFAO. That is for those teens who may have an adult looking over their shoulder who may not approve of bad language. The point of the matter is, with all this new way of chatting, the younger generation is losing touch with the real english language and the proper use of it.
IF we are to groom our children to be the next leaders of this world, how can we rightfully let them go on speaking and writing this way?
I was browsing through some sites and came across this one which I thought was a good read. You should read it and decide for yourself.

'Yo, can u plz help me write English?'
By Steve Friess, special for USA TODAY
Carl Sharp knew there was a problem when he spotted his 15-year-old son's summer job application: "i want 2 b a counselor because i love 2 work with kids."

Margie Johnson of St. Charles, Ill., says she tries to help her granddaughter Bailey Cross with her writing.
By Anne Ryan, USA TODAY

That night, the father in Phoenix removed the AOL Instant Messenger program from the family computer and informed both his children they were no longer to chat with friends online.

"That shorthand comes from talking on the Internet, and it's unacceptable," Sharp says. "I never thought I'd be encouraging my kids to talk on the telephone, but I realized that the constant chatting on the Internet was destroying their ability to write properly."

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Friday, November 11, 2005

I have a pretty bad headache tonight so I am just going to leave you with an article that will provide you with some useful information on how to create a winning ebook.

How To Write An eBook People Will Actually READ
Copyright 2005 Jim Boere

The hardest part of writing is the first sentence.

When you look at the whole project, it seems like an
impossible task. That's why you have to break it down into
manageable tasks. Think of climbing a mountain. You are
standing at the foot of it and looking up at its summit
vanishing into the clouds. How can you possibly scale such
an immense and dangerous mountain?

There is only one way to climb a mountain - step by step.

Now think of writing your eBook in the same light. You must
create it step by step, and one day, you will take that
last step and find yourself standing on the summit with
your head in the clouds.

The first thing you have to do, as if you actually were a
mountain climber, is to get organized. Instead of climbing
gear, however, you must organize your thoughts. There are
some steps you should take before you begin. Once you've
gone through the following list, you will be ready to
actually begin writing your eBook.

Beginning Steps to Writing an eBook

First, figure out your eBook's working title. Jot down a
few different titles, and eventually, you'll find that one
that will grow on you. Titles help you to focus your
writing on your topic; they guide you in anticipating and
answering your reader's queries. Many non-fiction books
also have subtitles. Aim for clarity in your titles, but
cleverness always helps to sell books - as long as it's not
too cute. For example, "Remedies for Insomnia: twenty
different ways to count sheep". Or: "Get off that couch:
fifteen exercise plans to whip you into shape".

Next, write out a thesis statement. Your thesis is a
sentence or two stating exactly what problem you are
addressing and how your book will solve that problem. All
chapters spring forth from your thesis statement. Once
you've got your thesis statement fine-tuned, you've built
your foundation. From that foundation, your book will grow,
chapter by chapter.

Your thesis will keep you focused while you write your
eBook. Remember: all chapters must support your thesis
statement. If they don't, they don't belong in your book.
For example, your thesis statement could read: "We've all
experienced insomnia at times in our lives, but there are
twenty proven techniques and methods to give you back a
good night's sleep".

Once you have your thesis, before you start to write, make
sure there is a good reason to write your book. Ask
yourself some questions:

* Does your book present useful information and is that
information currently relevant?

* Will you book positively affect the lives of your readers?

* Is your book dynamic and will it keep the reader's
attention?

* Does you book answer questions that are meaningful and
significant?

If you can answer yes to these questions, you can feel
confident about the potential of your eBook.

Another important step is to figure out who your target
audience is. It is this group of people you will be writing
to, and this group will dictate many elements of your book,
such as style, tone, diction, and even length. Figure out
the age range of your readers, their general gender, what
they are most interested in, and even the socio-economic
group they primarily come from. Are they people who read
fashion magazines or book reviews? Do they write letters in
longhand or spend hours every day online. The more you can
pin down your target audience, the easier it will be to
write your book for them.

Next, make a list of the reasons you are writing your
eBook. Do you want to promote your business? Do you want to
bring quality traffic to your website? Do you want to
enhance your reputation?

Then write down your goals in terms of publishing. Do you
want to sell it as a product on your website, or do you
want to offer it as a free gift for filling out a survey or
for ordering a product? Do you want to use the chapters to
create an eCourse, or use your eBook to attract affiliates
around the world? The more you know upfront, the easier the
actual writing will be.

Decide on the format of your chapters. In non-fiction, keep
the format from chapter to chapter fairly consistent.
Perhaps you plan to use an introduction to your chapter
topic, and then divide it into four subhead topics. Or you
may plan to divide it into five parts, each one beginning
with a relevant anecdote.

How to make your eBook "user friendly"

You must figure out how to keep your writing engaging.
Often anecdotes, testimonials, little stories, photos,
graphs, advice, and tips will keep the reader turning the
pages. Sidebars are useful for quick, accessible
information, and they break up the density of the page.

Write with a casual, conversational tone rather than a
formal tone such as textbook diction. Reader's respond to
the feeling that you are having a conversation with them.
Break up the length and structure of your sentences so you
don't hypnotize your readers into sleep. Sentences that are
all the same length and structure tend to be a good aid for
insomnia!

Good writing takes practice. It takes lots and lots of
practice. Make a schedule to write at least a page a day.
Read books and magazines about the process of writing, and
jot down tips that jump out at you. The art of writing is a
lifetime process; the more you write (and read), the better
your writing will become. The better your writing becomes,
the bigger your sales figures.

In an eBook that is read on the screen, be aware that you
must give your reader's eye a break. You can do this by
utilizing white space. In art classes, white space is
usually referred to as "negative space." Reader's eyes need
to rest in the cool white oases you create on your page. If
your page is too dense, your reader will quit out of it as
soon as their eyes begin to tear.

Make use of lists, both bulleted and numbered. This makes
your information easy to absorb, and gives the reader a
mental break from dissecting your paragraphs one after the
other.

Finally, decide on an easy-to-read design. Find a font
that's easy on the eyes, and stick to that font family.
Using dozens of fonts will only tire your readers out
before they've gotten past your introduction. Use at least
one and a half line spacing, and text large enough to be
read easily on the screen, but small enough so that the
whole page can be seen on a computer screen. You will have
to experiment with this to find the right combination.

Of course, don't forget to run a spell and grammar check.
You are judged by something as minor as correct
punctuation, so don't mess up a great book by tossing out
semicolons randomly, or stringing sentences together with
commas. (By the way, that's called a "comma splice.")

Last of all, create an index and a bibliography. That's it!
You've written a book! Now all you have to do is publish
your eBook online, and wait for download request from your
website visitors.


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